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6 Weeks in on Writing Journey

posted by: ShonBacon

Instead of a long, drawn out discussing of my journey this go round, I’m going to give you a sneak peek at my story, Into the Web, which continues the Double Inkwell series and the lives of twins Jovan Parham and Cheyenne Parham.

I will say this; I’m on day 43 of the writing journey. Today, I am to have 22,360 words written. I have 24,735 words. So, I’m making it.

So, what is Into the Web about? Well, still fleshing that out as this is the first time I’m writing without the net of an outline. But essentially, we’re about two years past everything that happens in Death at the Double Inkwell [which you need to buy now], and the twins find themselves squarely in the center of a case involving a serial killer who meets young victims online, then kidnaps and murders them.

Without further ado, here’s the prologue to Into the Web. Remember, this is a rough draft. Haven’t been back to look at anything yet. Just plowing through.

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Except for the glow that resonated from the laptop’s screen, the room was devoid of light.

In a corner of the room, Celeste Franks sat upon a metal chair, her weary eyes focused on the back of his head. She watched him as he sat before the laptop, leaning forward, and typing with a swiftness that only came with skill. Or obsession. Or both.

She licked her lips, finding them and her tongue dry.

“Thirsty,” she whispered.

The man continued his feverish typing.

She thought about keeping silent. If she did, perhaps he would continue playing on the computer instead of playing with her. Just the thought of his eyes taking in her barely-there body made her stomach flip. His hands on her adolescent skin made her want to vomit. But what would there be to vomit? She hadn’t had a drink of water all day and what he considered food was no more than something grainy, like Cream of Wheat or grits too watered down.

She blinked and tried to think about how long she’d been there. Had it been a day since she ate or drank? With the windows boarded up, the only source of light she received was from the laptop’s screen, and that didn’t tell her much.

Her first night in the room, a moment she wished she could erase, was met with a beating that left her too delirious to notice that he had forced himself onto her, into her. It wasn’t until she had awakened hours later and saw the blood on the floor and between her legs that she realized he had taken her virginity.

Celeste coughed before saying, “I’m thirsty.”

“I heard you the first time,” the man replied gruffly.

He remained at his laptop.

Celeste wiggled her bare toes, trying to remove the cramping that began in her thighs and made its way down her legs.

She smiled, something she hadn’t done since the man took her.

Ten days.

That’s how long she had been here. She had been released from her shackles nine times thus far, allowed to get up and move about the room—only after the laptop had been removed from the room, her hands had been tied, and her mouth covered. After the fourth day, he allowed her hands to be free, her mouth uncovered. When he saw the shine diminish from her eyes, he knew she wouldn’t put up a fight, let loose a scream, and she didn’t.

Ten days.

She frowned.

Her bottom lip quivered.

She prayed, she wished, God, how she wished she could go back in time and never have wandered into Teeniverse, an up and coming social networking site for teens. Because of it and her joining, she met Doug and thought she met a cute boy who liked everything she liked.

After two weeks of daily talking with Doug, Celeste jumped at the chance to see him when he texted her, “Cn we c 1 another f2f finally?”

She knew her parents would kill her if they knew. They didn’t want her to even think about boys or have a boyfriend for at least another two years, when she’d be 16. And to know it was someone she met online? They would obliterate her laptop, crush her cell phone, and then come after her.

But she agreed to meet him at a local pizza parlor, a ten-minute walk from her house.

But she never made it.

She bounced down the stairs, dressed in her cutest jeans and pink top, her long black hair pulled back into a ponytail. She didn’t wear makeup, though she wanted to wear some desperately, but she was allowed to wear lip gloss, and she coated her lips with her favorite flavor, bubble gum.

She lied to her parents, something she never did in the past, as she said, “I’m going to meet Carina at her house to watch a movie. Her parents said it’d be OK. Be back in two hours.”

Her parents kissed her, told her to behave, and said dinner would be in the oven upon her return.

A tear slipped down Celeste’s eye as she thought of her parents. She missed them terribly and knew that they were worried. She could see her mother, an older version of her, sitting on the front porch, waiting, hoping for her return, praying that nothing bad had happened.

No tear fell, however, as she bounded out the front door of her house and practically ran down the sidewalk. She made it nearly halfway before a red car pulled up alongside her, and a man with a baby face smiled at her and said, “Doug said you were pretty, but he didn’t say you were this pretty.”

Celeste blushed, but she at least had the right mind to ask, “Who are you?”

“David, Doug’s older brother.”

Celeste looked inside the driver’s side window. “Where’s Doug?”

David rolled his eyes. “Stupid kid told our ‘rents the truth about meeting you, and now they want to meet you. Make sure you’re not some old woman after young boys. Mom said,” he added, raising his voice an octave, “You go pick up that young lady and bring her here. We won’t be having any of that To Catch a Predator going on in our house.”

Celeste laughed. “Parents sound cooler than mine. My dad would lock me in the house forever if he knew I was out here.”

“Well, let’s put my parents’ insanity to rest,” David said. “I’ll give you guys a lift to the parlor afterward.”

Celeste trotted around the front of the car and slid into the front passenger seat.

“So, tell me,” Celeste said, excitement building, “is your brother as cool as he seems?”

David turned to Celeste and chuckled. “He’s OK. I’m the cool one.”

And when he pulled off, Celeste set back, smiling and hopeful of meeting Doug.

She didn’t know she’d never meet another person again.

Fear crept inside her. Usually, the pain of being constricted would be making its grand entrance in her body right before the man would set her free to walk in the room. The pain had set up residence, playing her muscles like guitar strings. She wanted to scream just to alleviate it, but the fear gripped her.

Why hadn’t he fed her? Why hadn’t he given her something to drink? Why hadn’t he let her loose?

She stared at the man’s silhouette, the glow that radiated around him from the screen. When she did this long enough, she was able to take quick snatches of the room around her. She saw the twin bed, neatly made, the dresser beside the computer table, the seat with bucket beneath it where she was allowed to go to the bathroom.

She hadn’t used that today either.

Instead of releasing her fear, Celeste said one last time, “May I have something to drink?”

“Damn it,” the man yelled. He jumped from the chair and spun to face Celeste in her corner. “You think this is all about you, you, you, huh?” He marched toward her and delivered a powerful blow to her face. Celeste let loose a loud grunt before her head rolled back and her eyes closed.

“You ain’t even that pretty,” the man said, spit flying from his mouth. “Damn sure not as pretty as the last one, and neither one of you hold a candle to the next one.”

The man’s brown eyes grew dreamy as he moved toward the laptop and stared at the picture on the screen. The young blond-haired, blue-eyed beauty that stared back at him made his entire body stiffen.

“You and me?” he said to the picture. “I know we’ll be together forever.” Celeste groaned, and the man frowned. “But before I can have you, I have to do away with her.” He stared at the picture until his smile returned. “And for you, I will do anything.”

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From No Agent to Publication

posted by: ShonBacon

In podcast #5 of The DDIW Chronicles, I talk about how I went from parting ways with my agent to finally finding a publishing house for Death at the Double Inkwell. Check it out below and remember that you can check out all things related to DDIW here on the site. Click on BOOKSHELF, and then click on the cover!

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Behind the Title “Death at the Double Inkwell”

posted by: ShonBacon

Like most of my stories, a title usually presents itself before I start writing the book. Characters will be invading my mind, their lives playing on my mind’s screen, and while reveling in their lives, an “essence” of their stories will develop. That essence ultimately becomes the title of the story. And if I’m lucky–as I have been thus far with publishers, the title I come up with initially gets to STAY.

In my first DDIW Chronicles podcast [link], I talked about how DDIW came to be. At the very beginning, I knew a few things about the story: there would be twin mystery novelists and there would be a death–and I had an idea of who would be the one to die.

So, the title, Death at the Double Inkwell isn’t a metaphor or some deep thought of the book; it literally arose because of the death and because the two main characters were twins (double) and writers (inkwell).

Sorry to disappoint those who thought I might be deeper than this. LOL Sometimes, I’m so not.

When LLP accepted my book for publication, there was a chance that the book wouldn’t be called DDIW. I can’t even remember the other suggestions, but I stuck with championing for Death at the Double Inkwell as the title even when my pubber said, “But there is more than one death in the book.”

And there was. LOL In a revision, I had added a few more corpses, this is true. But as I argued, there was one big death that moved the main characters through their storylines (though I have to shake my head now because what death is “little” – such the thoughts of a writer).

But of course, the title only tells part of the tale; there are still 80,000+ words that do a great job in visually showing how these twin mystery novelists must ban together and deal with the death (and the aftermath) that occ

Each of these men has an agenda when it comes to Jovan, and she has to figure out which ones mean to do her harm and which ones mean to help her out of the darkness she’s cast into.

Learn more about these man by picking up Death at the Double Inkwell.

It’s available NOW at Amazon.

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4 Weeks in on Writing Journey

posted by: ShonBacon

Needless to say, I did not write as much as I did the first two weeks; however, I’m still on course to finish the journey with 80k. What’s going to help me with this? Well, I finish a summer class next Wednesday, and from then ’til fall semester starts, I’m going to attempt to write more than the needed 520 words a day. That way, once school starts back up full blast, the 520 words won’t feel daunting, and I would have accumulated a good two weeks’ worth of “cushion”.

The first two weeks of writing, I wrote 10,347 words.

The last two weeks of writing, I wrote 5,280, nearly HALF. But that’s OK. I’m not beating myself over that.

For the 28-29 days I’ve been writing, I needed to cross through Friday having written 14,560-15,080 words. With my current 15,627, I beat that by 547, so I’m good.

SO, what has caused the slowing down of writing? Two things:

1) Real life – I’ve written a lot in the last week, nearly 20,000 words—but they were words for class/academic work projects. When you write that much, it’s hard to keep writing, and with my tendinitis, the ol’ hands and wrists were like, No mas.

2) Writing without an outline – I’m sorry. I LIVE for outlines, and I know now, beyond any shadow of a doubt, that I will never write another long project without an outline. Outlines gives me structure, order. They also give me freedom. I never follow them to the letter because you never know what will transpire during the writing process; however, with the outline, I feel free to move and question and explore. Without the outline, I flounder, and as a writer, I don’t like floundering. Soooooooooooooooooo, therefore, OUTLINE for me. LOL

It’s interesting. This book will be the second in the Double Inkwell mystery series, but I’m not sure it’s a mystery, yet. LOL Prologue? Screams mystery. Everything after that so far, not so much, and I think I’m beginning to see why. The first book was about a mystery within the main characters’ lives, so it was immediate. In this book, the mystery is not tangible to the characters’ lives, so we’re able to see more development of the characters’ lives and what’s going on within them and once the case goes “live”, then the main characters become more invested in solving the case–if ANY of that makes sense.

But I’m going to keep writing and then see what others say so that I can go back and rewrite. Working very hard in not letting the “What the hell is this I’m writing” thoughts crowd my mind and keep me from writing.

We’ll see how that goes.

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The Men of DDIW: A DDIW Chronicles Commentary

posted by: ShonBacon

Jovan and Cheyenne are the major chicas of Death at the Double Inkwell, but several men play integral roles to the telling of this story, and each man is his own man, too, with unique personalities that range from the misguided to the strong Alpha male.

Cordell Anderson is the love of Jovan’s life. The two met in college, and Cordell was quick to pursue her and make her his wife. He’s the founder and CEO of Anderson Technologies, a thriving technology company…or is it? So many secrets surround Cordell it’s hard to figure out just who he truly is. And as the story moves on, so many of those secrets are revealed that it takes Jovan’s memories of the good times for us to see that he wasn’t always an ass.

Timothy Anderson is Cordell’s younger brother. He and Cordell get compared to one another all the time–in looks alone. Their lives are as different as sun and moon. Whereas Cordell is a take charge, get what he wants when he wants it kind of man, Timothy is quiet, reserved, timid. He has collected some demons over the years, and in the past, he has used harmful means to eradicate those demons. He’s now trying to be on the up and up and make his life right, but a tragedy soon unravels his progress and his life.

Jimmy Devane is an associate of Cordell’s, which would be fine if he wasn’t A) an “associate” of a lot of Cordell’s competitors and B) an absolute slime ball. His allegiance is to the thing or the person that can get him the most money, damn the consequences.

Detective Ian Davenport is “the” man of the pack. He’s strong, confident, caring, and determined to right wrongs and put wrongdoers where they belong: in prison. When tragedy strikes Jovan’s life, Ian is quickly immersed into both Jovan’s and Cheyenne’s lives, much to Cheyenne’s chagrin. And despite the fact that he needs to be impartial to solve the case, Ian quickly finds himself drawn to the twins…one in particular.

Mark Brockman is a do-gooder, but when it comes to dealing with a serious situation in his life, he decides to “do him” instead of handling the situation, which leads to consequences he’s not prepared to handle. When his world is turned upside down, he finds comfort in the most unlikeliest place.

Each of these men has an agenda when it comes to Jovan, and she has to figure out which ones mean to do her harm and which ones mean to help her out of the darkness she’s cast into.

Learn more about these man by picking up Death at the Double Inkwell.

It’s available NOW at Amazon.

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Starting a New Novel Writing Journey

posted by: ShonBacon

A group of my sister-friend-writers have been wanting to get back into writing for some time, but life kept getting in the way. Life and discouragement. We have been talking to one another, trying to encourage each other to pick up the pen (or put fingers on keys) and get to writing. Instead of constantly saying this individually, we have decided to go on the journey together and encourage as we ALL actually write.

Today starts a five-month journey to writing a novel. From June 25 to November 25, each of us will be writing an 80,000-word novel.

So, we have 154 days (520 words a day) to get our books done.

And I’m thinking in these small increments, too. I have so many things to do with class and research and work that I can’t think of having to write a lot every day. 520 words is a little more than two pages a day. I write more words than that just in the tweeting I do. Surely I can do it for my writing career.

And I’ve found for myself that writing these days isn’t just about passion. I’ve become pretty pragmatic since I started doctoral work, and I realized that for me, writing has to be about more than passion, just as a relationship has to have more than love/attraction. There has to be a means to an end, and I’m not just talking about finishing the book. I have several books, good books, on my computer, hoping to see the light of day. I’m not into (anymore) wanting to write for my laptop, so I need a reason to write this book, and I have one.

This book will be book two in the Double Inkwell series I have always wanted to do. Now that Death at the Double Inkwell is out [order HERE], I have a reason to write the second book — and interested publisher.

And so today I started the second book titled Into the Web.

Today, I wrote 602 words. Doesn’t sound like a lot, but it’s a start, and more importantly, I succeeded in accomplishing today’s goal.

It’s all about the baby steps.


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The Importance of Sisterhood: A DDIW Chronicles Commentary

posted by: ShonBacon

They say that behind every great man there is a great woman.

I really think that saying is beside every great woman is a great sister who always comes with the straight, no chaser advice, warm hugs, and a ready-to-take-on-all-challengers stance when things get a little sticky.

Every woman can recall at least that one sister—from birth or from another mother—who has been there to listen to her frustrations over a relationship, her aggravation over a job, her devastation over a loss, and her infuriation over being done wrong. And she can recall that sister railing with her over her man and then getting real to show her where she went wrong. She can recall the friend telling her to look for another job, to find something that will make her happy and keep her living well. She can recall sistergirl sharing tissues with her as they both cry over the emptiness she feels at having lost someone. She can recall sistergirl saying, “OK, where’s my Vaseline and sneakers?” when it time to crack a skull or two open on her behalf.

There are a plethora of self-help books written about how women can find the man of their dreams and keep him, but we often forget about the importance of having a great sisterfriend, that woman who can see you bare, ugly truths, lies, secrets, and all, and who will still stand beside you, like a trooper, helping you to grow into the strong woman you are destined to be. There are many components to a person, and a romantic relationship can satisfy many of those components; however, nothing can replace the relationship of sisterhood and how it, too, can feed your soul.

Jovan Parham-Anderson from Death at the Double Inkwell [Amazon] has a sister like that: her twin, Cheyenne.

These two may look alike, but their personalities are polar opposites. Whereas Jovan is often quiet, reflective, and quick to find fault with herself, Cheyenne is loud, opinionated, and always ready to put blame on the right person.

Despite their differences, the two connect in powerful ways when the other steps up to be there for her sister.

When Jovan thinks her husband Cordell is having an affair, who does she run to? Cheyenne

When Jovan suffers an unimaginable tragedy, who does she run to? Cheyenne

When Cheyenne’s temper places her in harm’s way, who comes to protect her? Jovan

When Cheyenne catches feelings for someone who seems to be her arch-nemesis, who does she spill the beans to? Jovan

Even when Jovan’s and Cheyenne’s lives are put in danger, they rely on one another to make it through.

As betrayals and lies surface and threaten to drown them and the twins find themselves in peril, will relying on their sisterhood see them through?

You’ll have to read Death at the Double Inkwell to find out.

It’s available NOW at Amazon.

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The DDIW Chronicles: 2nd Excerpt [podcast]

posted by: ShonBacon

In podcast #4 of The DDIW Chronicles, I’m offering yet another tasty excerpt of my solo debut project, the mystery Death at the Double Inkwell.

This podcast features the first couple pages of chapter two. If you haven’t bought the book yet, this excerpt will surely pique your interest!

You can check out the podcast through my one-stop DDIW shop here on my site [link].

You can also order YOUR copy of DDIW through Amazon [link].

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The Agent Experience with Death at the Double Inkwell

posted by: ShonBacon

In the third podcast of The DDIW Chronicles, I talk about my agent experience with Death at the Double Inkwell.

You can check out the podcast through my one-stop DDIW shop here on my site [link]. Definitely consider ordering YOUR copy of DDIW through Amazon.com [link].

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I (along with Death at the Double Inkwell) Am Featured at Myst Noir

posted by: ShonBacon

Not only is my mystery, DEATH AT THE DOUBLE INKWELL a featured title for June at Myst Noir [LINK] (mysteries written by African-Americans and/or featuring African-American sleuths), but also I sit down for an interview with Myst Noir founder, author Angela Henry to talk about DDIW and writing. Come check out the interview [HERE].

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